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I first started writing whilst doing an access course in 2005, completing an advanced higher. From there I went to study for a BA in Humanities & Social Science at Edinburgh University studying mostly History (favorite being Social History). Graduated in 2010 with a UG Diploma. Having completed 3 years with the open university studying Creative writing and Children's Literature, I graduated in 2014 with a BA Honours degree. In 2012, 'The Letter' was published in Flash Fiction World Vol 1. As a keen photographer I am currently working on a compilation of flash fiction using my own photos as prompts. Thanks for stopping by xxx please leave me a comment, all are appreciated, come on!! say Hi, stay a while and have some cake!!!xx

Wednesday, 6 February 2013

Frosted Needles (warning explicit language)


The large steel door creaked and slammed shut as Adam climbed the last few steps to the roof. As he shuffled towards the railings the bitterly cold chill cut its way through his clothing. Heavy frost clung to every surface; only solitary thawed drops were allowed to escape. Adam shivered as one found its path through his layers to warm skin….hanging his head, he sighed.  Beneath him, frosted crystals shone with an orange aura, twinkling in the streetlights. It looked like glitter. He thought of a Christmas card that once stood on the mantle…he sighed again.  On the floor by the railings Adam spotted a small coin nestled in bed of frosted needles. He picked it up and looked at it. Lifting his head he gazed at his view; there was a calm warmth about it, all golden and at rest. For a while he stood completely motionless, the only movement being a tuft of his coal black hair twitching in the breeze…
‘Why are you sighing? You sad piece of shit! I suppose you think that by hanging your head down being miserable, that no one notices you. But they do notice…because you smell and you’re filthy. They notice because they know what you did!’

Looking over the edge, Adam noticed how close the ground seemed. He stroked the face on the coin.

‘Yeah go on flip it, heads you don’t, tails you do, at least then you’ll feel like you've got some fucking control…ha ha ha’
Heads

Adam tried to ignore the irritating verbal in his head. The voice pierced through his every waking thought. It dug deep into his dreams when he slept, if he slept. It had been his constant companion for the last few weeks and Adam was drained! His clothes were torn and filthy. Faded jeans covered thin white legs; a black t-shirt clung to his skinny torso. The hooded sweatshirt he wore as a jacket was as waterproof as a paper bag and not much warmer. The sleeves hid the intimacy he’d had with a razor once. His face was tear-stained from bloodshot eyes. The grime of the streets was five years thick and home was a corner of the roof-space.  He had reached that place in the dark where there were no more lights. Trying to control his thoughts Adam started to hum his favorite song…the verbal piped up again…
‘Humming? Seriously! Do you actually think that will shut me up, drown me out? What a waste of space you are. I suppose you think you can sing? You know what will shut me up’
Tails
The wind was picking up a little, a layer of snow thick enough for a covering had settled while he’d been stood there. The town below echoed that on the Christmas card, all peaceful and calm. Closing his eyes, he remembered, snow angels, ice-dens and icicles as ‘long as your arm’ and how the snow suffocated all that lay beneath it…he dropped his head again and sighed.
‘Oh there you go being all sentimental…you stupid prick! Bloody snow-angels… what a joke!!...I remember you as a boy!!! Pathetic little git who wet himself all the time…Smelly Wiggins… yeah that’s what they called you…’
Heads
Adam thought back to his childhood. Verbal was right! The local kids were cruel, most kids are. They didn't know what kind of life he was living. They didn’t see what he saw. To them he was just a tatty kid. Deprived of the things that make children smile; toys, sweets, holidays, clothes, shoes, food and love.
There was a happier time, him and mum had just moved into the town and he was starting a new school. The house was clean, mum was clean; he was clean. Then the dickhead came, then Sally came, then..., Adam signed again. From that moment all memories of being happy always included Sally.

‘What’s that? You happy! When? Never… that’s when!! As long as I've known you ain't ever been happy…you’re just a sad little prick. Ah yes Sally! Pretty little thing, you two were close. She idolized you, shame! She knows what you did.  Can you live with that...now you’re all alone?’
Tails
The crap wasn't obvious at first, the odd shouting spat and a broken window or two. Things were ok. It was around the time Sally started walking that it changed. The drink, the names, the shouts, the slaps, pushes, punches, tears and pain all rained down on three of them. The dickhead would always be bringing boxes of stolen stuff home. Mum would always be making herself look beautiful just so he could call her a slag and then after it would be him, Adam, holding her while she’d cried. He remembered the first time his mum scarred her skin. The first time he saw her with a black eye and the first time he felt the same. He stopped going to school. He stayed at home, helped look after Sally, while mum slept off the drunken abuse from the night before.  Adam remembered that Christmas…the last one at home …
‘Yeah Christmas, what started that fight? You know…that fight!!! That moment! What was it that pushed that button? You know they will find him…you didn't hide the body right, cause you’re a fucking idiot. Five years of weather will reveal it…then they will find you’
Tails
Closing his eyes again Adam pictured the knife, upright in the body on the living room floor. Christmas was trashed but the presents remained wrapped. Mum had run out with Sally when the fight began. When they returned, both men were gone. On Boxing Day when Adam came back, his mum went for him. Slapping his face while she screamed, she believed the dickhead had just left her and it was his fault. For all his pleading no amount of truth broke through the beaten down woman’s head. Without a goodbye, Adam left…
‘She never believed you. She blamed you!!! She just thinks he left, what if she knew the truth, maybe she does know! You never even said goodbye to Sally…bet she hates you now. What would she say if she saw you, you sad bleeding twat…she’s better off without you!’
Tails

Adjusting his grip, Adam felt the metal frozen to his skin…a gentle pull and the fresh breeze cut though the new reddened sore on his palm.
‘Oh now look what you've done you stupid git. Fucking freeze burn. Go on! I see you looking…thinking that will shut me up…go on!!.........let go…
Tails
Verbal’s tone had taken a lower sinister feel to it…like a razor sharp whisper. Adam opened his eyes and looked down. There were lights now coming from a small café a short distance away. He could smell coffee and bacon. Smoke and steam were illuminated by the coldness in the air. The day was awakening and Adam knew it was time to move on.
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Sticking her nose over the polystyrene cup, Sally inhaled the aroma of her hot coffee. Sitting on the wide window ledge she leaned back and glanced up at the falling snow. She smiled remembering when she was little. The ice dens in the garden, games invented by Adam to hide from the bad stuff indoors. They made snow angels, his little angel Adam would say. For as far back as she could remember it was always her and Adam. Mum was asleep a lot during the day and the waste of space she shacked up with walked through them like they didn't exist…until that Christmas…
Adam had been a memory for years; her social worker said that he’d gone off the radar…whatever that meant? She knew she missed him. Even more on days like this. She wasn't angry anymore that he’d left, she just thought of him often. It had been rough. Mum left leaving Sally behind, she was sixteen; it turned out to be a blessing. With Adams help Sally had grown up savvy, she was smart, a hard worker. This knowledge had served her well…
Sally loved town on mornings like this. She glanced down the road. The soft white blanket wrapped itself over the ground, hiding the gloomy littered speckled streets. The rain that fell the day before had frozen overnight and glistening shards hugged to every surface. A golden glow added a fire like heat. There was a peace that only a select group of eyes saw. Sally was one of the lucky ones. The first of the days transport were leaving tracks in the fresh virgin snow. The small café on the corner had just opened. Familiar faces greeted her as she smiled a ‘hi’ at them. Every morning Sally brought her coffee here. Every morning she saw the same people. Every morning she sat on the same ledge and every morning was the same…until…
Sally looked at the small coin nestling on a bed of frosted needles; she looked up to see a face looking back.
‘What is it?’ a voice called.
‘Heads’ Sally replied.

©Mills Laine

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