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I first started writing whilst doing an access course in 2005, completing an advanced higher. From there I went to study for a BA in Humanities & Social Science at Edinburgh University studying mostly History (favorite being Social History). Graduated in 2010 with a UG Diploma. Having completed 3 years with the open university studying Creative writing and Children's Literature, I graduated in 2014 with a BA Honours degree. In 2012, 'The Letter' was published in Flash Fiction World Vol 1. As a keen photographer I am currently working on a compilation of flash fiction using my own photos as prompts. Thanks for stopping by xxx please leave me a comment, all are appreciated, come on!! say Hi, stay a while and have some cake!!!xx

Wednesday, 7 March 2012

Misplaced Hero


Wrong way along the Tays,
winding, wandering, worried daze.
newflash! headline! today at four
police surround a battered war.
blue striped tape. stops the enter.
visions of the nights storm centre.

cardboard window, weathered door.
silver-fish on a bathroom floor.
oil-stained carpet hides the hall.
crimson face-paint moistened wall.

worried faces, stare not care.
solemn silence, full aware.
concerned neighbour say a word!
future lessons will be learned.

screaming cries broke through the sound,
heard by fresh ears, next door bound.
frightening fear of horror noise,
seen by tears of innocent toys.

multi-coloured hue of pain,
non kept promise, yet again.
summer shades hide blood-shot eyes.
falling tears from a million tries.
broken sprit, loss of mind,
no more times, abandoned kind.

beautiful, shy, bride mum, teen.
who fell in hell, substitute dream.
washed daily in fist shaped showers,
returning seasons, blood soak hours.


glistening razor stopped the breath
one that dragged  life to near death.
black or white, right or wrong.
shining bangles, prison song.

an anguished heart to keep the vow!
front page headline she is now.
ended a life to win that fight.
the history here don’t lose sight,

 internal innocent, face life alone,
a debt unpaid, a future owed,
a misplaced hero, mum or dad
the wrong way along the tay ...sad!

©Mills Laine


1 comment:

  1. I absolutely loved this. Fantastic imagery, lovely rhythm and brilliant descriptives of a battered woman. Particularly liked 'multi-coloured hue of pain, non-kept promise, yet again' and, well all of it actually. Lovely stuff.

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